Thursday, 19 July 2007

  • Ode

    This is something I scribbled on the back of a receipt while I was waiting for my friend at Applebee's.  I thought I'd share it so at the very least, I can remember it.  <edit> this poem has a title, which tends to be a rarity* for me, unless it is something like "untitled" or my favorite, "unfinished."  But this one is called...

    Emmaus

    whenever the wind rustles the tree leaves
    on a mild summer day
    I am reminded of you,
    our meeting on a day
    so far from the mild summer kind--
    cold, and a little bit cloudy,
    dusk approaching (or perhaps already there) and fall leaves
    crunching madly beneath my feet--
    treesmap
    (here the receipt is turned over)
    but your voice is the same, and
    this wind--this still smallness of your voice--
    the same.  And so I think of you.
    I think of wind, and the Spirit,
    and the thrilling heart of that quiet
    Nicodemus, questions like torrents
    bursting out of a dam destroyed by
    love, joy, peace, gentleness, goodness,
    you.  And so I think of you.  

    (and on another section)
    I think of grapes and figs,
    pomegranate leaves and apple trees,
    vineyards laden and
    workers laboring with their toil
    glistening on their foreheads, their
    hands moving in faith to a voice
    not so far away calling well done,
    well done
    ...  and so I think of you.

    (and then just for fun)
    I think of Elijah and the brook,
    ravens coming, and angels prodding,
    Elijah, wake up,
    I think of fire and flame
    the seven thousand who have not
    and you, that still small voice
    and so I think of you.

    ----

    *another rarity: this poem begs to be understood.

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